Here's a poem. Insomnia!?
So many things run through my head
As I lay in this bed
Nothing, but thoughts glide through my mind
So I’m laying awake instead,
Wishing for some kind of sleep tonight
Some sign of little relief
No dreams come for me now
They leave me in my grief,
Thinking through the present and past
Hoping this spell won’t last
How many hours must I lay here awake
Before slumber can be casted,
Many hours are passing by
As I start to cry
Wondering if I’ll sleep tonight
Trying to figure out why,
Morning comes after long hours spent
Thoughts still moving, no slumber meant
Now it’s time to begin again
As I quietly stir from my bed…
This one is a little different to the ones I have written before, but this was wrote after a really bad sleep last night. So in a way this was a true story. Thanx for reading it!
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Filed under: Insomnia
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wow i really loved that poem just use life experience and u can never go wrong k?
Im always here if u need to talk!
LYLAS!
it’s nice
10
Bravo!
10. good job. LYLAS!
I give it a 7/10, though I wonder if you ever tried free verse? Focusing on a stream of consciousness of metaphores and images instead of structured verses.